do i fit in?!
i was going thru so many blogs at this site today and was just amazed to see how ppl can put simple things in such a beautiful way! i dont think i am anywher close to them when it comes to the writing ... but that doesnt make me any sad. some ppl can do somethings and some cant..hehhee but yeh.. i sure can try. so i thought i'l get a little poetic today!
thru pages i read with surprise
seeing how people can make simple things sound so nice
make the weridest of things seem beautiful, even vice
everything sad, in happiness they disguise.
i wish i could write like that someday
write of blossoming flowers and golden hay
make the readers curious,they would strive
to make their books seem like, 'the book of life'.
hehe expecting a little too much eh? but i think thats a cool poem by my standards!well yeh i hav been in the company of ppl who write really well.. my closest friend is an amazing writer.. and the amazing part is that the best of his stuf he wrote for me..or atleast that is what i like to believe.well yeah so u can flatter girls big time by writng well i think!
i started doing a bit of readin too now a days.. it surprises me how i did not discover the pleasure of reading earlier..anyway...after the harry potter series and a few other selected books('a must read' all my heavy reader friends tld me), i am now readin 'the alchemist'..read half of it...yeh its a good book..kinda philosophical.. a nice style of writin i think.. hehe for me a good book is one which in simple words doesnt bore me.. dont know if its the thing ppl say bout geminis ..that they get bored real fast..but yeh.. most books i read the last page bfore i've read the 15th! so very important for a book to be exciting all along!
today was a fun day..met friends after a long time and hav some project work to do now! hehh hav a bet with a friend that i'l go for a morning walk for a week atleast.. knowing me .. he is super confident that he'l win..but naah..i gues wil do it this time.. i need to win the treat :D
alrite then! heeh hope someone likes the poem :)
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Comments
[No Subject] | Posted by Sonal Chauhan
Getting started is half the job done. Keep the good job going cos I am here to read.
[No Subject] | Posted by jai
Good one Nice, keep it coming. And did u finish the book yet?
[No Subject] | Posted by smile
hey jai!! how did u know it was me!the other comment helped eh? yeh nopt done with the book yet but did go for the morning walk.hav fun
[No Subject] | Posted by Richa
dont bother what others write. this ur blog. have fun.
[No Subject] | Posted by jai
there were few too many things that made me think that it was u, and i did nt see the other comment at first, but i concluded it was u after seeing the other comment.
anyway good luck with the book, and with the walks too.
cheers
[No Subject] | Posted by george
i'm terribly bad at judging poems, so dunno... but everything seemed to rhyme except the last 2 lines... thats good enough poetry :)
the beginning of all great things are small.
way to go girl :)
[No Subject] | Posted by dawn
u bet bout geminis! i have never even read the first ten pages of ny book without reading the last page!!!!!!! guess we r jus like that!.. a good start btw..:)
[No Subject] | Posted by liveonimpulse
still waiting for my chopper....
Many trains have passed,
on stones the rains have carved,
sunshine and raindrops...
will there distance be halved.
A rainbow in the making,
stars and moon for the taking.
Another walk in the clouds,
a divine goddess with a pout,
a fairytale or reality, a big doubt.