my space!!!!!

here is were my thoughts pour in.....

i wish..

wildhydgirl | 13 February, 2005 07:45

i wish..
i cud look into ur eyes forever
i cud talk to u forever
i cud be urs forever and ud be mine
i cud speak to u until i drop dead
i cud stay awake jus to listen to u
i cud fight all ur fears
i cud wipe away all ur tears
i cud love u forever
if only u wud let me

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cowboy | 13/02/2005, 20:07

what are you? an aspiring poet or something?

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whg | 15/02/2005, 18:07

:-s

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hanktheyank | 19/02/2005, 20:16

:) nice!

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nasar shammasi | 22/02/2005, 01:11

here is were (where) my thoughts pour in....thought i'd let you know..I love the lines you write.

Nasar

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Kumar | 22/02/2005, 09:15

Great!

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ausaaf | 22/02/2005, 12:47

great writings keep it up and thnx

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anil aggarwal | 22/02/2005, 15:25

i wish ....
i cud see u...
i cud feel ur feelings...

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rishabh | 22/02/2005, 16:04

you such stuff and u r mood is happy?? really? cool

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Ankur | 23/02/2005, 00:52

AND I WOULD SAY:
Where were you when I was burned and broken
While the days slipped by from my window watching
Where were you when I was hurt and I was helpless
Because the things you say and the things you do surround me
While you were hanging yourself on someone else's words
Dying to believe in what you heard
I was staring straight into the shining sun

Lost in thought and lost in time
While the seeds of life and the seeds of were planted
Outside the rain fell dark and slow
While I pondered on this dangerous but irresistable pastime
I took a heavenly ride through our silence
I knew the moment had arrived
For killing the past and coming back to life
-Pink Floyd

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Kro_Rider | 23/02/2005, 09:24

A moment lost in gleeful ignorant innocence of a romance can be pardoned but the unabashed surrender to the eternal kitsch of romantic ideal at the risk of gettingg burned is nothing short of an unbridled invitation for the flames.... write in when u feel the heat! :-) happy wandering till then..

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keshav | 23/02/2005, 12:17

Hi, keshav here, seen good

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Anil | 23/02/2005, 17:53

lovely one...expecting some more like this

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Madhu | 23/02/2005, 19:05

Love......It will make u shine brighter in ur life...wishing u all the success 4 ur love........

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ramesh kumar mudiraj | 23/02/2005, 19:06

hi myself ramesh, crkmudiraj at yahoo.com.

excellent amita......love cant be expressed and ur trying to express it......lovly

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Rahman | 23/02/2005, 20:18

Love is Love
one who gets in Love feels the world is with him.
amita has written well
Love with romance feels that u r in the different world.

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whg | 24/02/2005, 10:15

omg!!!!
wat jus happened here????
and i was going to stop writing!!!
@hty hyellooo >:D

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whg | 24/02/2005, 10:17

dats a lootta ppl i dont know ;) thank u :) @nasar i know the mistake jus didnt change it for a frnd @ankur :) nice song

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Neurotron | 24/02/2005, 14:06

girl, explain this to me...
how the...???
2000 hits in 7 days?
how the...????

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Me | 25/02/2005, 17:19

wonderful, and I wish ..u get watever u wish...
Mayur

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Gem | 26/02/2005, 18:57

i feel exactly the same for my sis who lives only within me

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