Ecstatic Failure

ayyo paapum
*hugs*
hope you feel better, sometimes aisa hi hota hai

Why amateurish? I think I like it best out of all that you've written so far. Seriously. Pretty impressive. :)

gud one and quite nice

this probably is one of the best you have written Rock, keep it coming
(Just one small advice, instead of "lost her", you should have said "lost you", to keep of the flow of the verse even in voice)

@Jaan : Thanx, just a mood thingy

@Aran : I felt it was amateurish coz I didn't put much into it.

Um, small doubt, u a dude or a dudette? :| Sorry in advance (for obvious reasons)

@maverick: thnx :D

@Jai: U see the poem is as if I am relating the incidents to someone, so lost you would sound incorrect. Anywho, where've u been? Don't c u much now-a-days.

oye well wrtten man..u b good at this...

waisa u can try m-seal or feviquick brand rum...best saathi for ur gum! :D

ayyo paapum..=))

is the lil pebble of a FH member growin' up? :D

nice post mayte. :)>-

Payne

Dudette. :)
And no apologies needed, it's a common enough assumption. Bad choice of name I suppose.

@Akhil : I think I'll remove the brands and stick only to the rum ;)

@Payne : How cud u compare the "rock" to a pebble?? Blasphemy!!

Thnx for the compliment tho!

@Aran : Alright, coz ure style sounded more feminine to me.

May I ask how the choice of name came about? :|

The first two letters are the first two letters of my name and the last two are the first two of my surname. That sounds so much like a riddle. :|

For example: Salman Khan might be Sakh. That way. :)

Can someone PLEASE show me how to put up a bloody image on my bloody blog?? :((