Levels of abstractiveness
baap | 29 August 2004, 5:34pmI grow closer to them
They recede farther from me
With intention do i do this
A cruel motive for a sort of peace
Every time they laugh due to me
A smirk hidden charged as a fee
Everytime they share a secret
A wicked smile across is kept
Trust i have to lost to the one i trusted
Love i have lost to the one i loved
Alliance i have lost with the one i fought with
I traverse the horizon between protection and filth
Rhyme in this verse is not true
For if it rhymes, you have the wrong clue
Trust no more, love no one, fight alone
The moon, the light which is less, the Sun.
Singing of elevated prescience, sets limits
A roof on top to dam the highs
A floor below to uplift the lows
In this room of equilibrium are the seeds i sow.
A tribute to the light in a closed ending in a facial expression of exclamation!
PS: I thank the constant inundation of the story of a symbologist, Donnie Darko,the movie,and a budding rock star....(with long hair and some NBA description of his genitals), which helped me in conjuring this piece of abstract verse.
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1. By Anil | 29 Aug 2004, 6:34pm
Damn good. Just love the last stanza. And I also liked the way you arranged your poem visually. Very nice!
2. By divakar | 29 Aug 2004, 7:11pm
wow!!!! that was amazing, especially the last few lines.
3. By romu | 29 Aug 2004, 9:53pm
:-0