Morning after.
Neurotron | 28 October 2004, 10:42amThe fragrance of the night past still lingers on
the struggling silences bursting at the seams,
talking to lazy sunbeams
jealous of the painful beauty and my complete lack of attention
Ethereal wraith, you rise and my spirits follow
even before my first wave of emotion has been ridden
to the hilt, faced the bullets, senses forbidden
pleasures lying there, spent shells, though not forever hollow.
Memories, filtered and crystallized
reluctant drops of mercury register the latent heat
as my mind walks forgotten chemical streets
you return with fiery spheres of ice
Quench.
Current Mood: Thoughtful
Current Music: Lady - Colonial Cousins (more the video, actually)
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1. By Jai | 28 Oct 2004, 11:42am
morning after????
its not the pill u are talking about ... are u????
2. By Aran | 28 Oct 2004, 1:22pm
And again. Very good. There's something about your poetry... The only complaint I have that the muse visits too infrequently. :)
3. By Neurotron | 28 Oct 2004, 2:37pm
~Jai: no man, I'm not.
~Aran: Thank you, m'dear. :-) Nice to see you after so long. Funnily enough, I think this is the first poem I've written without a muse...!
4. By inez | 28 Oct 2004, 11:16pm
:) not gonna spoil it wit comments...
5. By diva | 29 Oct 2004, 8:05pm
dude...all i can say is...that was awesome.
6. By Neurotron | 30 Oct 2004, 2:30pm
~Diva: hey man, long time! Thanks... :-)
7. By diva | 30 Oct 2004, 7:29pm
hey...where r u man??? u havent even replied 2 my mail...is everythin ok??
8. By Jaan | 1 Nov 2004, 1:24am
Wow, my dabbling in poetry is not up this high standard! Absolutely loved it, and hey, thanks for reading me blog :)