Catharsis
Neurotron | 7 December 2004, 7:00pmNo, let me spew tonight
This vile disgust inside
Seeping through my pores
Burning, corroding, eroding
the coarse fabric of my being
The green liquid reaches a crescendo
the screams bubble; burst
You missed the innuendo
She slaked the thirst
Begone, harbinger of gloom
Don’t try so hard
to squeeze blood from wine
Go dissolve your life
and let me distill mine.
Current Mood: Vicious
Current Music: maybe tomorrow
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1. By Stupendous Man | 7 Dec 2004, 8:00pm
ever told you i really like the way you write poetry?
2. By Stupendous Man | 7 Dec 2004, 8:00pm
whoops. poems, i mean.
3. By Neurotron | 8 Dec 2004, 12:28pm
Thank you, SM. :-)
You know I like the way you write, too.
4. By 2136 | 8 Dec 2004, 2:23pm
holy wow.
the last line... brillante!
5. By Neurotron | 8 Dec 2004, 3:12pm
~2136: thank you. :-)
6. By blur | 8 Dec 2004, 9:20pm
stopped eating my donut because i wanted to read it more than once.......awsm
7. By Aran | 8 Dec 2004, 10:17pm
Yup. Loved the way it ended. And you already know I love your poems. :)
8. By diva | 9 Dec 2004, 2:47pm
wah wah wah wah!!!!
9. By Neurotron | 9 Dec 2004, 3:14pm
Blur, Aran, Diva...thank you so much. :-)
Diva, i especially thought u might like it.. :-)