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allsmiles | 22 December, 2004 14:10

As another one
bites the dust
and draws curtains
on the year that was.

A constant strife
to bridge the gap
between what was
and what could've been.

A hapless attempt to keep
scores in a duel
between dreams and regrets
between passion and apathy.

Weaving a web
of entangled emotions
creating a kaliedoscope
of beautiful,
and intricate patterns
Which eventually
fade in memory

Seeking bliss
in a purgatory that offers
security of the earth
and infinity of the sky.

The curtains would rise
Almost as soon as they fall
Bringing into centrestage
The year that will be.

Anil | 22/12/2004, 15:10

Nice...like the way you have described a year and its ephemeral nature! The penultimate verse is especially good.

tabrez | 22/12/2004, 22:32

how very true!

Pye | 23/12/2004, 21:39

And this from someone who said she couldn't write even two lines. Very well done. I too liked the same verse as Anil.

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