Think it over
Memories....So Many & Yet Too Few
rock_26iin | 15 July, 2005 18:04
Breaking chains
Breaking shackles
As they scatter
And rattle
Freedom achieved
Slowly
Painfully
The pain is lost
Thoughts, memories
All washed away
Mistakes realized
Slowly
Painfully
Pain reins once more
Memories flooding back
Memories I cherish once more
Breaking shackles
As they scatter
And rattle
Freedom achieved
Slowly
Painfully
The pain is lost
Thoughts, memories
All washed away
Mistakes realized
Slowly
Painfully
Pain reins once more
Memories flooding back
Memories I cherish once more
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rock_26iin | 04/08/2005, 00:55
You know, I agree so much with you that I've deleted the first two stanzas :D
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Aran | 19/07/2005, 22:17
You know, this poem doesn't start until the third stanza. And then it's very good. :)