They Managed To Say So Much...

rock_26iin | 04 August, 2005 01:37

Well, I actually wanted to write some prose here but unfortunately, or fortunately realized that I have very little knack for it. So my blog lay dormant for a while and then out of the blue, creativity strikes! What follows was written in 25 - 30 minutes and is supposed to contain a story (if you figure it out, tell me too, 'cause I want to know)

The power of darkness
I see in those eyes
The beauty of black
And sun-lit clear skies

I see them,
Filled with innocence
Brimming with joy
Startling by their radiance
Loving with arrogance

Quietly, playing with me
By their only power, vision
Giving consent to approach
Then refusing permission

Mirroring the impossible
Signifying the unattainable
Silently reminding me
That they are free

Fly away, I tell them
For you are to come back
I cannot live without you
You already know that

Lowering themselves
Savouring the moment
Harbouring the pain
While I stand silent

Then the dreaded words

Comments

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lizard king | 04/08/2005, 15:04

hey rocku boy.... keep challenging ur energy this way man. u ll surely make a really good poet, if i were u, i d give up science for art

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Jai | 04/08/2005, 15:06

shit too much alcohol early in the evening... spell mistakes to be corrected from the previous comment... rocku= rocky.... challengeing=- channeling

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lizard king | 04/08/2005, 15:06

hey rocku boy.... keep challenging ur energy this way man. u ll surely make a really good poet, if i were u, i d give up science for art

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hs | 05/08/2005, 16:44

wow ! really nice ...loved it ..:-)

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Wisecrack | 05/08/2005, 20:09

Awesome!!!
err..Who was she? :)

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Wisecrack | 05/08/2005, 20:18

Awesome!!!
err..Who was she? :)

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rock_26iin | 06/08/2005, 22:16

@LK : Thanx, you've supported me the most through all this crap :D, i owe you one

@hs : 'm glad u liked it

@wisecrack : thnx! err...i can't tell u *hide behind sofa emoticon*

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