The Night Of Truth

rock_26iin | 01 January, 2006 00:28

I had no plans for new year's eve so I sat down in front of my computer, with a blank Word Document in front of me. My fingers, for reasons best known to them and my brain's sub-conscious started typing and this is what they came up with:

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He waited for her. He sat still but his insides felt as if they were ready to fall out of him. He knew it was Judgement Day, it had to be done now, there was no turning back today. He had already made all the arrangements. He knew that this was a fork in the road of his life and he had to make a choice, a choice he had delayed for nearly a decade

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wisecrack | 01/01/2006, 01:09

Good piece of work.. A lil mushy for me though!Anyways keep blogging..you rock! :D and of course A very happy new year to all!

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s | 01/01/2006, 16:37

very corny but very well written.

couple of things though:
After the bill was cleared and each of them had a cup of coffee placed before them he knew it was time. - did they move to a coffee shop? why did he broach the subj after paying the bill?

Although I don

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rock_26iin | 02/01/2006, 10:58

@WC : Thnx and same 2 u

@s : Well, he didnt want to do it during the meal in case she got offended and left. And he needed them both in a relaxed mood

It means he sent that box before he spoke to her. So he didnt know when he wrote the letter but he knows now.

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Aran | 03/01/2006, 01:15

I liked it. Very idealistic but also straight from the heart.

I liked the image of the girl you managed to create. Very calm and soothing somehow.

Some specifics:
I don't like the word waltz. Why not dance?
I also hate the "My dear". I realise you have no names in there but I want my love letters to be more personal than 'my dear'.

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rock_26iin | 03/01/2006, 21:50

Hi Aran

I dunno, Waltz just seems more..intimate.

Dance can be anything but a waltz is something more specific.

Okay, will try to keep the "My dear" part in mind if i end up writing any more stuff like this ;)

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cartman | 06/01/2006, 08:21

great title....sensibility being pointless.....hav to giv this one a big thought......

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apoorv | 08/06/2006, 23:52

Mate,this one was really beautiful.Read almost entire blog of your today.the poetries are truely wonderful.Keep blogging.

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