Dude, i told you not to read that fantasy stuff...now look at its effects !

I loved the first piece a lot. The feeling of disconnect is subtle yet very much there, boiling under the surface. The second was unfortunately a little too obvious and a bit cliched as well. All in all I like the way you've expressed what you are feeling. A very interesting read this was!

Hey thanks Anil... yes the second one is obvious..and i believe thats how i feel sometimes..
sometimes its too obvious that i don't belong here and sometimes its very subtle.