Posted by raghu
03 March 2006, 1:03pm
The final nail being bored on to the coffin . . .
The coffin lays buried deep down the ground.
No regrets,
No remorse.
Only that the 'buried' seems to be a stranger.
Strange it is....
because the stranger was once a beautiful friendship.
And the pangs of separation strike
when the realization dawns...
The being of the coffin is
an indispensable part,
to be found again.
And the self will have his remorse.
Until the dawn of the day....
Until the memories of the cemetery wade.
Tailpiece: Friendships break. The best of friends become the perfect of strangers. Its a comman happening. All thru the world.
This titleless poem happens to be the only poetry that i ever wrote. And i am sure i will never get back to it. I seldom understand poetry. And i understand i must never venture into writing one!
Current Mood: Thoughtful
Current Music: none
The coffin lays buried deep down the ground.
No regrets,
No remorse.
Only that the 'buried' seems to be a stranger.
Strange it is....
because the stranger was once a beautiful friendship.
And the pangs of separation strike
when the realization dawns...
The being of the coffin is
an indispensable part,
to be found again.
And the self will have his remorse.
Until the dawn of the day....
Until the memories of the cemetery wade.
Tailpiece: Friendships break. The best of friends become the perfect of strangers. Its a comman happening. All thru the world.
This titleless poem happens to be the only poetry that i ever wrote. And i am sure i will never get back to it. I seldom understand poetry. And i understand i must never venture into writing one!
Current Mood: Thoughtful
Current Music: none
3 Mar 2006, 1:15pm
ur take on friendship's wrong side, somehow seems too harsh
3 Mar 2006, 2:13pm
U write pretty well...u shud get back to it when u can...:)
4 Mar 2006, 10:06am
Why must not you venture? You surely would be able to understand what you write.
And are not poems just another selfish exercise we indulge in moments of extreme sentiments?
4 Mar 2006, 10:32am
dat was a good one...
it somehow jus in a flash showed me wat my future mite be... without all those people dat now i love n care...
honestly, im gonna fight and try to keep my best of friends jus d same... perfect of strangers is inconceivably severe on me ....
4 Mar 2006, 4:24pm
@donnie:i agree, its a dark poem :-(
@shrink: :-)hmm... sure.
@adarsh: I wrote it some 9 months back. Had to try hard to make out what i had intended to write then.:-)But i do agree that there is nothing which is so very concise and yet evokes so many feelings.
@june: I always wonder, what the meaning of 'june'probably could be. :-)
4 Mar 2006, 10:01pm
i can let u in on the 'June' secret u know ;)
5 Mar 2006, 1:07pm
Ahhh donnie dear, dats a question intended for me :P
and museman...really, keep wondering..coz 'June' aint goin nywer for a while :)
5 Mar 2006, 4:56pm
@donnie,june: Museman is missing out on the party eh? I am quite bad at guessing/wondering. spill the beans please.
@june:On hotblog with first post! wow! way to go buddy.June and zoe...hmmm! :-)
7 Mar 2006, 9:44am
thnks.....:)
honestly... maaajorly excited :) :)