27 Apr 2006
"Summer nights, random thoughts"
I take two steps forward,
towards you,
my wishful future.
You take two steps backward,
into the abyss,
your painful past.
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Tiring, lonely nights,
your thoughts,
ignites my soul.
I realize,
I am still alive.
I have a question.
Do you ever think of me,
like I do?
I wait for a response,
I wake up.
I run, in search,
of an illusion.
I repeat those words,
I fight the conflicting thoughts,
I quench my thirst,
In those ruins.
Current Mood: Thoughtful
Current Music: Janis Joplin
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By Shrink
28 Apr 2006, 9:54am [ Reply ]
Damn...you are too gud at this Diva...:)
Just loved the way u put across ur feelings...and it makes even more sense to me coz i know the inspiration :-)
Loved the whole poem...but my fav para:
Tiring, lonely nights,
your thoughts,
ignite my soul.
I realize,
I am still alive.
By June
28 Apr 2006, 10:42am [ Reply ]
i have to agree....damn yer too good!
By Shrink
28 Apr 2006, 1:46pm [ Reply ]
You've been tagged!! :P
By Diva
28 Apr 2006, 7:30pm [ Reply ]
Shrink: Thank u, and as i mentioned, just boring nights, thats it...BTW, are we meeting this weekend? Buzz me..
By Diva
28 Apr 2006, 7:30pm [ Reply ]
June: Thank you, lady!
By museman
1 May 2006, 1:16pm [ Reply ]
how cud be a poem so very terse and yet convey so much? Me amused. The editor is bang on this time. Poet extraordinaire. :)
By Diva
1 May 2006, 3:46pm [ Reply ]
Museman:oops...i never realised that the "post extraordinaire" was mine..hehe..thanks for the comments and letting me know, museman.
By Shrink
2 May 2006, 2:53pm [ Reply ]
Abboooo...hot blog n all...:P
Wat happened over the weekend? Nething i should know??? :D
By Diva
2 May 2006, 4:20pm [ Reply ]
Shrink: Yes, there is something you must know...my dream has finally come true....i saw balayya's movie in a theatre..hehehehe
By Diva
3 May 2006, 12:04pm [ Reply ]
Sven: how do i reach you?