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9 Jul 2009

Song of the Soul

Posted by Oblivion in Poetry | 7:43pm

The patter of rain
Battering my heart wild
Laughs and reminds me
Of your words sweet
The black of the sky
Enveloped in melancholy
Teases and reminds me
Of your tresses dark
The fleeting clouds
Moving to the worlds afar
Beckon and remind me
Of your tread gentle
The fair lonely star
Shining in all its splendour
Smiles and reminds me
Of your glance gleeful
The resplendent full-moon
Playing hide and seek
Chides and reminds me
Of your smile beautiful
The quiet of the night
Bathed in faint moonlight
Whispers and reminds me
Of your presence silent
I hanker for your love
Give me your hand
I long to see you
Gift me your glance
At this very hour
For, nothing else matters
Tender is the breeze
Impatient is my being
As I whisper loud,
"Give up everything
wait no more
and come to me, my love"

3 Comments | "Song of the Soul" »

  1. By your beloved (?):

    3 Aug 2009, 8:39pm [ Reply ]

    there's always great finess and exquisite beauty in love that's imagined / visualised... love for the love of a beloved... when one's more in love with the concept of "falling in love" (a very romantic idea) it brings out the best of emotions. and the best of creatives are somehow the result of exalted emotions...

    but, just to clarify - this comment was only a meandering thought, and is in no way linked to this particular song - i think this poem is most beautiful. thanks oblivion, it's an honor.

  2. By a fan:

    17 Jul 2009, 11:06pm [ Reply ]

    its very beautiful, i guess the only thing i will say is that both the person it was intended for and the person who wrote it cant be undeserving:)

  3. By it's me...:

    10 Jul 2009, 6:37pm [ Reply ]

    "Time goes by,
    life goes on,
    and all I can think of is
    why you're gone..."

    and somehow, there's this huge silence and i seem to keep yelling in deafland... and life's stopped answering me. :(

    relationships are nothing without a little risk and faith, they say... n i am too much of a coward to take any risks... nor do i have any faith left in me or anyone or anything anymore...

    wish your love wasn't so wasted on someone so undeserving!

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