28 Jun 2004
(Bits of you) Safe in me
Bits of you
haunted I sit
They play upon my memory
Shifting planes
of grief and joy
Random mix of imagery
Where one starts
another ends
The endless, moving tapestry
Sweetest scents
of times elapsed
Bitter at times, some sugary
In each other
the bodies fit
Exact physical symmetry
Velvet soft
your touch on me
So exquisitely feathery
Grasp a scene
so soft and smooth
Withhold a while, then set it free
Spells you cast
I'm hypnotised
Your own brand of sorcery
Close my eyes
And see you there
Then smile because you're safe in me.
14-10-03
Just memories overwhelming the senses... :o)
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By mls
28 Jun 2004, 11:06am [ Reply ]
As usual ... you never disappoint! Nice one yet again :)
By mls
28 Jun 2004, 11:09am [ Reply ]
As usual ... you never disappoint! Nice one yet again :)
By Tabrez
28 Jun 2004, 11:27am [ Reply ]
Now thats what i call poetry!
By Pye
28 Jun 2004, 11:38am [ Reply ]
Thanks, mls, Tabrez. Your comments mean a lot. :)
By aloque
28 Jun 2004, 3:04pm [ Reply ]
speechless, and you can imagine how hard that is.
By Pye
28 Jun 2004, 8:11pm [ Reply ]
Thanks aloque.
I realise I just say thanks to all the comments, don't know what else to say really. But I really do appreciate these. :)
By The Rainmaker
15 Jul 2004, 8:10pm [ Reply ]
interesting to note that all of your poems had been written much earlier. coming out of the closet, huh? good poems btw.
i write too, but standard 4 line stanza ones. what is this style of writing known as? (3 liners)
By Pye
16 Jul 2004, 4:03pm [ Reply ]
Thanks Rainmaker. Not all of them are old, just some of them. When they are old, I write the date, when they are written on the same day I post, I don't write the date.
The 3 line thing is not exactly a style. It's just how that poem came out.
btw, can I see your stuff?
By The Rainmaker
16 Jul 2004, 11:59pm [ Reply ]
i'll have to sift thru my stuff and decide which ones are for public consumption :)
but... they're very Average. you're not missing out on anythng!!
By Stupendous Man
17 Jul 2004, 2:22pm [ Reply ]
I msut say Pye. I see your poetry, as and when you post them, are getting to be well written. I like the previous poem, but I was unsure whether you'd see the comments there. So posting it here.
Keep them coming, dear. :)
By Stupendous Man
17 Jul 2004, 2:22pm [ Reply ]
I msut say Pye. I see your poetry, as and when you post them, are getting to be well written. I like the previous poem, but I was unsure whether you'd see the comments there. So posting it here.
Keep them coming, dear. :)
By The Rainmaker
26 Jul 2004, 1:08am [ Reply ]
stopped blogging??
By Pye
28 Jul 2004, 10:16am [ Reply ]
Hmmm... tried to. But FH bombarded me with mails saying how much I was wanted here. Evil, I say. Plain mean.