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28 Jun 2004

(Bits of you) Safe in me

Posted by Pye in Poetry | 10:06am


Bits of you
haunted I sit
They play upon my memory

Shifting planes
of grief and joy
Random mix of imagery

Where one starts
another ends
The endless, moving tapestry

Sweetest scents
of times elapsed
Bitter at times, some sugary

In each other
the bodies fit
Exact physical symmetry

Velvet soft
your touch on me
So exquisitely feathery

Grasp a scene
so soft and smooth
Withhold a while, then set it free

Spells you cast
I'm hypnotised
Your own brand of sorcery

Close my eyes
And see you there
Then smile because you're safe in me.

14-10-03

Just memories overwhelming the senses... :o)



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13 Comments | "(Bits of you) Safe in me" »

  1. By mls

    28 Jun 2004, 11:06am [ Reply ]

    As usual ... you never disappoint! Nice one yet again :)

  2. By mls

    28 Jun 2004, 11:09am [ Reply ]

    As usual ... you never disappoint! Nice one yet again :)

  3. By Tabrez

    28 Jun 2004, 11:27am [ Reply ]

    Now thats what i call poetry!

  4. By Pye

    28 Jun 2004, 11:38am [ Reply ]

    Thanks, mls, Tabrez. Your comments mean a lot. :)

  5. By aloque

    28 Jun 2004, 3:04pm [ Reply ]

    speechless, and you can imagine how hard that is.

  6. By Pye

    28 Jun 2004, 8:11pm [ Reply ]

    Thanks aloque.

    I realise I just say thanks to all the comments, don't know what else to say really. But I really do appreciate these. :)

  7. By The Rainmaker

    15 Jul 2004, 8:10pm [ Reply ]

    interesting to note that all of your poems had been written much earlier. coming out of the closet, huh? good poems btw.

    i write too, but standard 4 line stanza ones. what is this style of writing known as? (3 liners)

  8. By Pye

    16 Jul 2004, 4:03pm [ Reply ]

    Thanks Rainmaker. Not all of them are old, just some of them. When they are old, I write the date, when they are written on the same day I post, I don't write the date.

    The 3 line thing is not exactly a style. It's just how that poem came out.

    btw, can I see your stuff?

  9. By The Rainmaker

    16 Jul 2004, 11:59pm [ Reply ]

    i'll have to sift thru my stuff and decide which ones are for public consumption :)

    but... they're very Average. you're not missing out on anythng!!

  10. By Stupendous Man

    17 Jul 2004, 2:22pm [ Reply ]

    I msut say Pye. I see your poetry, as and when you post them, are getting to be well written. I like the previous poem, but I was unsure whether you'd see the comments there. So posting it here.

    Keep them coming, dear. :)

  11. By Stupendous Man

    17 Jul 2004, 2:22pm [ Reply ]

    I msut say Pye. I see your poetry, as and when you post them, are getting to be well written. I like the previous poem, but I was unsure whether you'd see the comments there. So posting it here.

    Keep them coming, dear. :)

  12. By The Rainmaker

    26 Jul 2004, 1:08am [ Reply ]

    stopped blogging??

  13. By Pye

    28 Jul 2004, 10:16am [ Reply ]

    Hmmm... tried to. But FH bombarded me with mails saying how much I was wanted here. Evil, I say. Plain mean.

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