22 Mar 2011
Posted by Oblivion in
Poetry
| 2:36pm
walking on the tarmac
i spotted a dead rat,
still, quiet and dead,
and walked on
as if i noticed nothing
lying on the tarmac
the dead rat, still,
quiet and dead, spotted me
and slept on
as if he noticed nothing
an evening, sombre
a dark road, burning
a brief encounter
one was dead -
the dead rat or i?
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By Oblivion:
13 Apr 2011, 10:15pm [ Reply ]
@arjun: in short, it's about indifference. and one wonders if it is not death.
@Linus: some questions are vague, after all :-)
By Linus:
23 Mar 2011, 2:17pm [ Reply ]
if the dead was possibly not dead, isn't the question vague?
By arjun : Road
22 Mar 2011, 11:35pm [ Reply ]
Dear Oblivion,
I don't understand this poetry. But it looks good. Can you tell me what you want to say exactly?