« Previous | Next»

14 May 2004

Losing Control

Posted by Pye in Poetry | 7:27pm


Full. So full.
Burst at the seams
rage.

When did it get
this way
I wasn't looking
I didn't know
that I could

Anger can be red
Blazing, aching, blinding
Red.

Dams can burst.



Current Mood: Angry
Current Music: Limp Bizkit


2 Comments | "Losing Control" »

  1. By fullhyd.com

    14 May 2004, 8:27pm [ Reply ]

    Hi Pye,

    Please do not copy paste from Word - Word introduces a lot of junk code of its own which causes problems with formatting and brings your blog down.

    Aside of that, your poems are quite nice. Cheers!

  2. By Pye

    15 May 2004, 2:31pm [ Reply ]

    Thanks for the info. And for the aside. :p

    Seriously, quite appreciate it and will mind it in the future. :)

 1 
Add comment
 authimage