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27 Apr 2006

"Summer nights, random thoughts"

Posted by Divakar in General | 7:37pm

I take two steps forward,

towards you,

my wishful future.

You take two steps backward,

into the abyss,

your painful past.

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Tiring, lonely nights,

your thoughts,

ignites my soul.

I realize,

I am still alive.



I have a question.

Do you ever think of me,

like I do?

I wait for a response,

I wake up.



I run, in search,

of an illusion.

I repeat those words,

I fight the conflicting thoughts,

I quench my thirst,

In those ruins.



Current Mood: Thoughtful
Current Music: Janis Joplin

10 Comments | ""Summer nights, random thoughts"" »

  1. By Shrink

    28 Apr 2006, 9:54am [ Reply ]

    Damn...you are too gud at this Diva...:)
    Just loved the way u put across ur feelings...and it makes even more sense to me coz i know the inspiration :-)

    Loved the whole poem...but my fav para:

    Tiring, lonely nights,
    your thoughts,
    ignite my soul.
    I realize,
    I am still alive.

  2. By June

    28 Apr 2006, 10:42am [ Reply ]

    i have to agree....damn yer too good!

  3. By Shrink

    28 Apr 2006, 1:46pm [ Reply ]

    You've been tagged!! :P

  4. By Diva

    28 Apr 2006, 7:30pm [ Reply ]

    Shrink: Thank u, and as i mentioned, just boring nights, thats it...BTW, are we meeting this weekend? Buzz me..

  5. By Diva

    28 Apr 2006, 7:30pm [ Reply ]

    June: Thank you, lady!

  6. By museman

    1 May 2006, 1:16pm [ Reply ]

    how cud be a poem so very terse and yet convey so much? Me amused. The editor is bang on this time. Poet extraordinaire. :)

  7. By Diva

    1 May 2006, 3:46pm [ Reply ]

    Museman:oops...i never realised that the "post extraordinaire" was mine..hehe..thanks for the comments and letting me know, museman.

  8. By Shrink

    2 May 2006, 2:53pm [ Reply ]

    Abboooo...hot blog n all...:P
    Wat happened over the weekend? Nething i should know??? :D

  9. By Diva

    2 May 2006, 4:20pm [ Reply ]

    Shrink: Yes, there is something you must know...my dream has finally come true....i saw balayya's movie in a theatre..hehehehe

  10. By Diva

    3 May 2006, 12:04pm [ Reply ]

    Sven: how do i reach you?

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