Amateur Poet | General | 08 June 2004, 12:56am
When you are broken and and don't know what to do
When the men you trust are backstabbing you
When the God you once believed in deceives you
When you are alone thought there is a crowd about you
When you expect good news but it doesn't come to you
When you are broken and don't know what to do
When you are dismayed and your spirit is down
When upon your head is placed a thorn crown
When you are scared of the funniest circus clown
When your wife also refuses to wear your favourite gown
When on introspection you find that your self-esteem is out of town
When you are dismayed and your spirit is down
When you have nothing to hold on to and await death
When you are haggard and gasping for breath
When you have lost everything including your loin sheath
When the only sounds you hear are those of your chattering teeth
When you know that you have been living inside a hearth
When you have nothing to hold on to and await death
You know you are doomed and there is nothing else in store
You have even lost your soul you are worse than a whore
You have only one place to go which is the earth's core
You shuttle without reason unlike waves on the shore
You know to you life doesn't offer much more
You know you are doomed and there is nothing else in store
Dying in peace is all you can respectfully do
Contemplating your retribution is way beyond you
There is so much a man take and the limit has been reached by you
Damn it, there is no one else who can understand this but you
So go while there is still something left in you
Dying in peace is all you can respectfully do
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When you are seventeen tough seems the world
You do not know in you the inner girl
It is hard but we all manage to get through
Some learn from it some just let frustration brew
Life seems so rosy, perfect seems your ideal
One day you grow up and life gobbles up your zeal
You stop living and life passes you by
One day death becomes you and you fly high
When you are hurt so seems the world
Age, doesn
When a poem is written the beauty of which words words fail to define
When a girl puts out her ideals on the line
When it is almost heart-breaking to express the real
When you know saying that could fizz the youthful zeal
It is pardonable to let the Utopian aura reign
Till such time she grows up to the worldly vain
Oh boy! your are a piece of work. What? ha! what?....tell me about your wordly vain, i am ready!
Twigrl, really. I have been thinking for over 21 days as to how I should respond to your comment. Perhaps I should tell you. That would shatter all your youthful notions that you have every right to. If I don't tell you then you may forever remain ignorant.
However, I have come to the conclusion that if you have to ask me then you are not prepared to know.
Amateur PoEt, I would love to hear your prespective on life, i mean to say how you see it as real...to understand whats and whys.you see, life experiences shapes us all but when it changes our life prespectives to greater extend and impact us deeply then whatever that experience was more powerful than what a human mind can handle....and as i see it nothing is more powerful than our mind...i don't even know if i am making sense here....however, let me tell you this, i always learn the hard ways....so, even if the whole world preach me to do something i will do it only if my openions match...and if i sound too imature to you or some filled with zest for life that because i choose to like that .....so, believe me you telling me your reality of life will just make me a lil conscious of whats out there but not change me.
Oh no, Twigrl. I don't think you are immature. Rather, I think you are quite an intelligent woman, and I respect your zest for life.
Yes, there is something about making mistakes and learning from them. I know because I am like that - never really cared much about what the world thought/thinks. I do what I want to do, and if I choose to be cynical I do that completely of my own volition. That is just who I am. And who is to say that my take on life is wrong just because it differs from theirs?
Thanks for the compliment :)
When your heart is in pain
Your soul shattered and lost
When people you loved betrayed you, beyond your thoughts
When tears can