22 Aug 2004
One last time...
The last time i laughed,
everyone else around cried.
The last time i loved,
the world learned to hate.
The last time i dreamt,
the future looked unreal.
The last time i was hurt,
the wounds never healed.
The last time i prayed,
the Gods went insane.
Current Mood: Bad Hair Day
Current Music: Find the river- R E M
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By TheShrink
22 Aug 2004, 5:36pm [ Reply ]
the only word that comes to mind--- "amazing"!!!!
By Pye
22 Aug 2004, 9:11pm [ Reply ]
You start on a slow scale and build up to a suckerpunch in the last line. Really well done. :)
By whg
24 Aug 2004, 9:32pm [ Reply ]
totally agree with theshrink