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29 Sep 2004

Cloud

Posted by Divakar in General | 10:11pm


Lost in solitude,

no place to hide,

crippled soul,

broken mind,

wasted time,

frozen emotions.

Reason to breathe,

is still to chant,

your name,

in vain,

a cloud of pain.



Current Mood: Cold
Current Music: free bird


8 Comments | "Cloud" »

  1. By dawn

    29 Sep 2004, 11:11pm [ Reply ]

    Priceless importance
    Promising tomorrow
    Enuf to nurse
    A soul like urs

    hey...cmon out from behind the cloud and see the sunshine..:)

  2. By dawn

    29 Sep 2004, 11:12pm [ Reply ]

    importance=impartance

  3. By Jai

    30 Sep 2004, 5:01am [ Reply ]

    why do u want and who do u want to hide from anyway?

  4. By diva

    30 Sep 2004, 7:36am [ Reply ]

    dawn: been waitin for the sunshine here(literally)...that was an inspirin verse...thnx.
    jai:wish i had an answer mate.

  5. By Neurotron

    30 Sep 2004, 10:20am [ Reply ]

    *clap clap*. wah wah.

  6. By Stupendous Man

    30 Sep 2004, 12:45pm [ Reply ]

    arrey wah. now neuro takes words outta my fingers.

    nice red and all to this blog. :)

  7. By diva

    30 Sep 2004, 1:44pm [ Reply ]

    neurotron: thnx dude...hope u got my other mail..on rediff.
    stupman: thnx..yes it is red and attractive...wish the post was as good as ur's.

  8. By jai

    1 Oct 2004, 9:53am [ Reply ]

    7139807633.

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