Of sheer laced apologies
Tied with tender adoration ribbons
To be hung around my heart
Of your delicate touch
Drifting away, slowly
Like droplets of wax
Of a melting candle, losing it
Marvelous
(})
No Poems please... I want ur long posts. Discuss something. Period.
I love your long posts.
Btw i like this poem too. :)
Memories... this is what they do to you!
Should I be calling your poem nice, even though in reality it portrays vice (that someone has committed against the author)? Damn, this is the bad part about commenting on a sad poem... dont know whether to compliment or console the writer.
I write a poem, post it on my blog, go to fullhydblogs.com .. and what do I see? A poem better than mine, written a few mins before me :)
Had similar feelings a few days ago, but i am sure i would not have expressed the way you did.
U go champ!
Speechless. This is lovely, MG. Brilliant. {Plenty of hugs}
the rainmaker watches aran hug lily repeatedly.. has the same glint in his eyes that joey has when he sees monica and rachel hugging in Friends :D
Hand me a tissue, sobs!
Simply beautiful Lily. Wonderfully written and yet so sad. Hugs your heart.
You're a poet and you didn't even know it! Wonderful
Shoo rainmaker. Shoo!
continues with the hugging. peacefully.
please continue! :P
you r truly gifted. what do u do lily?
I hope you were right. Did the happy ones rush in after...
T: thanks
Me: request noted and thanks
Rainmaker: thanks for the sentiments, but consolation isn
accountant by trade.. what a waste of talent! india doesnt have a dearth of good writers, but it definitely needs creative & refreshing ones like u who can write wonderfully about everything under the sun. i'm sure plagiarists can make a fortune out of this blog! copyright it, Now..
lol, rainmaker, thanks, but hey, imitation is the best form of flattery, let them plagiarise!
I guess I'm a little late in commenting but I was pleasantly surprised by this poem. Its very very beautiful. Loved every line of it. Especially:
"Of your stars in my eyes
Or even in my velvet sky
Fallen on the ground now"
and,
"Though in your forever breaking promises
You enclosed my weakness"
So tender yet sublime.
Anil : thanks, appreciate your comment very much, and am glad that something resonated to my words
